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PostSubject: Letters I wrote   Wed Jun 01, 2011 2:34 pm

These are just some letters I wrote. I would love to have some feedback, the first one isn't directed to anyone really its just a random letter. The other two are directed to one of the girls I like at my school.

Dear, Whoever,
On the first page of our story, the future seemed so bright. Then this
thing turned out so evil. I don’t know why I am still surprised. Even
angels like you, have their wicked schemes, but you take that to new
extremes. I couldn’t quite understand what you meant. I went over it,
over and over in my head. I took it as goodnight it’s over. That’s all
you wrote. I can’t keep chasing you to give us a second chance; I don’t
think you understand the sacrifices I made. No more, half my life I
would have lay down and died for you, but no more. No more pain, you
took me for granted, took my heart and rammed it straight into the
ground. I will no longer let you control me, so you better hear me out.
I feel like you wanted me to be more than I could ever be. I was never
good enough. You think I never spent enough time with you. I spent half
of my day every single day with you, and then you got jealous when I
hung out with the other girls for parts of the day. You took away my
freedom, I made you my life. That was never good enough. Oh, now you
say I’m special, I don’t feel so special, nor did I feel special with
you. My friends kept asking me why I wouldn’t quit; I’m addicted to the
pain, stress, the drama I’m drawn to it, I guess I’m a mess. I was
caged by a selfish bitch, as I walked out of the cage you kept
screaming I would be missed. When you spoke of names that you cared the
most for, you left me off your list. Fuck you bitch, I’m done. My life
sentence is served. Go find someone else and make him feel special.

-Nick

P.S-It’s too late to save our love.



Dear Olivia,
God, I don’t even know where to start this. I guess I will start it
like this:

We touch I feel a rush, we clutch it isn’t much but it’s enough to make
me wonder what’s in store for us. Nobody knows me like you. I still
remember the day I first knew who you were and saw you. I instantly
thought: whore. Now, after talking with you, getting to know you, and
dating you, I have a totally different opinion. When I was stuck, I
always felt like I was talking to myself. Doubt was starting to creep
in my head that nobody would show up. Nobody sees my vision they say
its whack, but you actually understand me. It hurts when I see you
struggle, but you always pulled though. You like saved my life, I owe
my life to you. Some of my friends said that we wouldn’t last but look
at us now. It may feel like we’re a million miles away from each other,
but every time you’re feeling down take a look at this. I’m not afraid
to take a stand for us. All of the people that are looking down on us I
will tear down their balcony. As easy as you think it might have been
to write this, I just couldn’t figure out how to put all of my “love”
or “like” into this one letter. As difficult as it sounds, I still was
able to do it. All of this is from the heart, some of these phrases
were used in Eminem’s songs, but they are all true. I would do anything
for you. You know I would.

-Nick

Dear Olivia,

My life is brilliant, my life is pure, I saw an angel, of that I’m
sure. My life wasn't brilliant until I met you. After I talked to you,
I knew that I have seen an angel. I couldn’t believe that I met an
angel. People say you were sent from hell, but I never believed them.
I’m glad I didn’t, I always told them this after you gave me a shot.

“Look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity to seize everything you
ever wanted in one moment. Would you capture it or just let it slip?” I
told them that I was not going to let it slip no matter what they say
about you because you’re beautiful. Cause with you I’d withstand all of
hell just to hold your hand.

Right now, my girl is in the next room, sometimes I wish she was you. I
swear I thought I was over you, I now realize I never want to say
goodbye to you. I don’t know about you, but I know I’ve dreamt of you.
I guess I never really moved on. It would be really good just to hear
your voice call my name. The sound of you calling my name sounds so
sweet. You have the lips of an angel. On my knees I’ll ask last chance
for one more time, or I’ll ask last chance for one last dance. Because
you know, that I miss you. I’ve been far away for far too long.

-Nick
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PostSubject: Re: Letters I wrote   Wed Jun 01, 2011 3:08 pm

Most of these "letters" are just lyrics from Eminem, Rihanna or James Blunt songs...

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PostSubject: Re: Letters I wrote   Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:47 pm

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I still remember the day I first knew who you were and saw you. I instantly
thought: whore.

LMFAOOOOO!
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PostSubject: Re: Letters I wrote   Wed Jun 01, 2011 10:26 pm

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remember the day I first knew who you were and saw you. I instantly
thought: whore.

LMAO. Lol I'm sure she will appreciate you thinking she was a whore.... Eminem, Rihanna and James Blunts colaborations were excelent/

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PostSubject: Re: Letters I wrote   Wed Jun 01, 2011 10:30 pm

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Right now, my girl is in the next room, sometimes I wish she was you

Well that's just uncool of you sir. I've been there, but I haven't documented it.

Also a word of advice, drop the "your an angel" bullshit. She's a person obviously and therefor not an angel.

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PostSubject: Re: Letters I wrote   Fri Jun 03, 2011 12:28 pm

Haha Storme im glad you picked up on that so quickly. And honestly if you guys saw who I was talking about when that part I said about her being a whore, yea were 13 and in public i looked over to the side and I saw her reach for one girls vagnia and fingered her....believe me where I live we are all screwed up. Plus, they will probably never ever get these.
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